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对你的求职简历造成毁灭性影响的十个词汇-它们是哪些词汇呢？（转译） ... ... ... .. ...
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下面的这些空话套话，讨厌的术语，或者人人都习以为常的废话，最好从你的求职简历中排除。我只翻译了对应词，原因解释请感兴趣的朋友自己看。
10 Words and Terms That Ruin a Resume
Your resume needs an update -- that is, if your resume is like that of most people, it’s not as good as it could be. The problem is language: Most resumes are a thicket of deadwood words and phrases -- empty cliches, annoying jargon and recycled buzzwords. Recruiters, HR folks and hiring managers see these terms over and over again, and it makes them sad. Wouldn’t you rather make them happy? It’s time to start raking out your resume, starting with these (and similar) terms.1. “Salary negotiable” （工资可以商量）
Yes, they know. If you’re wasting a precious line of your resume on this term, it looks as though you’re padding -- that you’ve run out of things to talk about. If your salary is not negotiable, that would be somewhat unusual. (Still, don’t put that on your resume either.)
2. “References available by request” （若有要求，可以提供询查）
See the preceding comment about unnecessary terms.
3. “Responsible for ______” （负责某项工作）
Reading this term, the recruiter can almost picture the C-average, uninspired employee mechanically fulfilling his job requirements -- no more, no less. Having been responsible for something isn’t something you did -- it’s something that happened to you. Turn phrases like “responsible for” into “managed,” “led” or other decisive, strong verbs.
4. “Experience working in ______” （对某项工作有经验）
Again, experience is something that happens to you -- not something you achieve. Describe your background in terms of achievements.
5. “Problem-solving skills” （解决问题的技巧）
You know who else has problem-solving skills? Monkeys. Dogs. On your resume, stick to skills that require a human.
6. “Detail-oriented” （注重具体细节）
So, you pay attention to details. Well, so does everyone else. Don’t you have something unique to tell the hiring manager? Plus, putting this on your resume will make that accidental typo in your cover letter or resume all the more comical.
7. “Hardworking” （工作努力）
Have you ever heard the term “show -- don’t tell”? This is where that might apply. Anyone can call himself a hard worker. It’s a lot more convincing if you describe situations in concrete detail in which your hard work benefited an employer.
8. “Team player” （团队精神）
See the preceding comment about showing instead of telling. There are very few jobs that don’t involve working with someone else. If you have relevant success stories about collaboration, put them on your resume. Talk about the kinds of teams you worked on, and how you succeeded.
9. “Proactive” （主动性）
This is a completely deflated buzzword. Again, show rather than tell.
10. “Objective”（求职目标）
This term isn’t always verboten, but you should use it carefully. If your objective is to get the job you’ve applied for, there’s no need to spell that out on your resume with its own heading. A resume objective is usually better replaced by a career summary describing your background, achievements and what you have to offer an employer. An exception might be if you haven’t applied for a specific job and don’t have a lot of experience that speaks to the position you’d like to achieve.
发表评论 评论 (26 个评论)
- 回复 追求永生
- 估计娃娃一看这些，哈哈哈一笑：“过！”
ww_719: 不是死的,HR也是人,许多时候都看情况...
我就是HR,看简历要看的多了,从中国看到美国,文字是一部分,但面试是更重要的...哈哈..
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- 回复 ww_719
- 不会~,我会主要看我要招聘职位的描述,看看应聘者是否跟此职位相关的部分...有时,就是那一两个亮点,我就可以决定是否面试了...其他不重要,哈哈,..
追求永生: 估计娃娃一看这些，哈哈哈一笑：“过！”
- 回复 追求永生
- 真是经验丰富之谈，
ww_719: 不会~,我会主要看我要招聘职位的描述,看看应聘者是否跟此职位相关的部分...有时,就是那一两个亮点,我就可以决定是否面试了...其他不重要,哈哈,.. ...
我前面当然是开玩笑的。 
- 回复 追求永生
- 他如果有坚定的信仰根基的话，就知道“不求今世的好处”，一切都是为了荣神益人。
ww_719:
那位有信仰的得难过死,白相信上帝给我机会了,哈哈... 就会知道他这样的把机会给别人是得神悦纳的。
- 回复 ww_719
- 有那么高尚吗?哈哈..人都是自私的呀,要知道,自己失去工作,那就没饭吃呀,一家老小怎么办呢?哈哈..上帝呀.怎么不帮我呀...哈哈哈哈..
追求永生: 他如果有坚定的信仰根基的话，就知道“不求今世的好处”，一切都是为了荣神益人。
就会知道他这样的把机会给别人是得神悦纳的。 ...
- 回复 追求永生
- 感恩之心多的人就是容易满足的人。估计娃娃笑口常开，就是常有一颗满足的心。只有开心才能欢笑。
ww_719: 有那么高尚吗?哈哈..人都是自私的呀,要知道,自己失去工作,那就没饭吃呀,一家老小怎么办呢?哈哈..上帝呀.怎么不帮我呀...哈哈哈哈.. ...
